Oh, yay! Thank you! The dialogue is my greatest concern; maybe it's because I'm imagining myself as Jack while writing... It would be odd writing for your friends like that - of course, that I do actually have lots of practice at!
Continuing I am! The next chapter will be up next week - I'm aiming for weekly Friday updates. ;)
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Date: 2008-09-27 05:08 pm (UTC)Continuing I am! The next chapter will be up next week - I'm aiming for weekly Friday updates. ;)